Writing with 5th Grade Boys


As a resource specialist teacher, I lead a 5th grade ELA group for struggling learners. Writing is their least favorite occupation, especially because it doesn’t come easily for these students. We’ve been running a gauntlet of weekly “performance tasks” (I’m a grown up who likes to write and that name makes my blood run cold).

The first weeks were synthesizing two or three articles into informational essays. This week is a narrative “task” based on two articles: the assignment is to write a story based on the building of the Giza Pyramid in Egypt. I wasn’t looking forward to the moans and groans. If you’re a person who loves to use your imagination in writing (I raise my hand), you think “oh they’ll like that.”

But actually if left to think of it, my students typically balk more at this kind of open ended assignment. As I was getting them to open their Google docs and look at what we highlighted in the articles to use for their stories, I said, on the spur of the moment (though maybe my subconscious had worked it out in the night) “pick a name.” For some reason I pulled up a list of Italian boys’ names first instead of Egyptian. They got so excited about naming themselves–Tommaso, Riccardo, Dante–that they stayed motivated through the whole assignment, as we talked about how it was to sleep in rows with thousands of workers, eat bread under palm trees, and pull 2-15 ton stones. Just goes to show … there’s a personal place in all learning. You just have to find it.

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  1. It does, doesn’t it! We had a blast with it today, going on with the story. It’s hard for kids who are struggling learners sometimes to free-form craft their own imaginative story but with some prompts, we had their character sneaking in a doorway where it was nice and cool, and finding treasure, but then getting closed in! To be continued… They loved it.

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